Metrics for HAPPY, THE END
Daily Word Count: 650 today, 7.2k total (out of a likely 40-50k
Inspirations: Jeremy Enigk, Anberlin
The good:
“H-Hi...” I finally managed, finishing with a nervous laugh that made me sound eight years old. Gods, what a jest I was.
Then – worse and worse – she took my hand. Her skin was amazingly soft. If I had been much younger I would've taken her fingers and rubbed them along my cheek. Then I realized with a start that she had been talking. How much had I missed?
Bad writing skill that needs to go away: Things feel like they're moving too fast right now. Developments are popping out left and right. Also I don't have a clear enough idea in my head of what the princess looks like.
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Into chapter 4 here. Fin really meets The Princess in this one. It has to work. Their relationship is the driving force of the plot.
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