Metrics for HAPPY, THE END
Daily Word Count: 800 today, 8k total (out of a likely 40-50k)
Inspirations: Jeremy Enigk, the rain
The good:
I felt around me and my fingers came in contact with warm flesh – an arm. I examined more then quickly drew back – it was certainly a girl.
Bad writing skill that needs to go away: Too wordy again. All my first drafts are too wordy. Forgive me E.B. White... Simple is better.
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This chapter is just pouring out. This is the best take on this book yet. I can feel it. Things are finally clicking!
Monday, November 13, 2006
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