After thinking about the last chapter a few major holes just hit me. Fin accepts the quest way too easily. He's all ready to stage a huge fight with the witch and the troll and then he just rolls over with an okay, you win attitude. I don't think his character would accept defeat so easily. He's backed into a corner in this chapter but he should be already forming another plan to kill the witch.
Ignore this, I'm just thinking out loud...
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