Metrics for HAPPY, THE END
Daily Word Count: 600 today, 8k total (out of a likely 40-50k)
Inspirations: New age music
The good:
She observed me. Then sighed. “It's too bad you're the hero. You'd make a good sorcerer – always looking for shortcuts. Dark roads open and move with the wind, Fin. Catch them while you can and don't stop to make a map."
Bad writing skill that needs to go away: How do I write about philosophy without sounding like a prig? I don't want my character to start spouting Christopher-Paolini-esque Levi musings that have nothing to do with the plot. Tread carefully here...
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Chapter 4 sucks right now. I went back today and fixed some issues that had been bothering me with Chapter 3. I changed Fin's motivation for going on the quest and I think it works better. Still, I think I need to make it more urgent.
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2 comments:
That's a nice sentence. Phylisophical.:)(sp?)
Thanks for stopping by, M.
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