Pages re-written: 3 today 31 total
Inspirations: C.S. Lewis Emily Bronte, Kate Rusby, Stephen King.
New lines I like:
Lilith watched Fin through the window as he trudged away. His movements were so methodical and determined, so manlike – even in his walk. The foolishness that usually came with his age had passed him by without lingering and it was a pity, she thought. The years to come would be hard for Fin.
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So tired... It's been a long day. I'm just managing to finish this blog post before seriously crashing. Good night.
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